WHITTLING

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By Wayne Brown

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By: Wayne Brown

The old man sat on the bench out front of the little country store. It was his chosen place. His son-in-law owned the little store so the old man pretty much got whatever he wanted. He didn’t want or need much just a comfortable place to sit out of the sun so that he could whittle and contemplate whatever came to mind. Most days he just whittled with his old pocket knife that he kept razor sharp for this task. He never knew what it was he was going to whittle, it just kind of took shape with each cut and he just followed his instincts. Sometimes he made a small work of art in the form of a fish or dog or a pig. Other days, all he had to show for his work was the shavings at his feet. Either way, it was a satisfying way to pass the time. The shavings from his whittling spread out at his feet and clung to his plaid flannel shirt and khaki pants.

The old man watched the flow of cars along the two lane country highway. He noticed their license plates, the number of folks in the car, the luggage tied to the roof. He tried to imagine where they were heading or where they were coming from on their trek down the highway. Sometimes they stopped at the little store pulling up front of the small porch that he sat upon. They wanted gasoline most of the time. They also ran into the store use the restrooms and grab snacks. These were the ones he really liked because he could get a close look at them. Most paid no attention to the old man, either totally ignoring him or maybe offering a silent nod of the head as acknowledgement as they moved to and from the store. Most were in too much of a hurry to care about him or what he was doing there. That was okay with the old man, he just wanted to sit and whittle now anyway.

There was a time many years back when he had driven the big locomotives. He had ridden the engineer’s seat for decades taking freight back and forth across the country pretty much from sea to shining sea. In those treks he had spent a lot of time alone in the cab of those engines. He had seen the backside of America, the parts that most folks don’t get to see who travel the highways. The train went just fast enough to get there and just slow enough for one to soak up for one to soak up the beauty and awe of all the faces of America one could see from the rails. Having seen all that, it was not difficult for him to imagine why some men chunk it all and spend most of their life riding the rails. The life of a hobo could have some benefits. The one thing he disliked about the trains is they required him to be hands-on. There was little or no time for whittling and contemplation. Now that he was retired, those things had changed. Now his hands were free to create articles of wood and his mind was free to sort throw the thoughts and memories of his life and place each one into its proper folder.

A white Toyota mini-van pulled up in front of the gas pumps. A man exited the driver’s side and headed for the pump preparing to put gasoline into the tank. A small boy climbed out the right side door, possibly 5 maybe 6 the old man thought. The boy ran between the pumps and stood momentarily on the island looking up at this dad. “Now you stay where I can see you, Joey. And you stay out of the lanes here so no cars run over you,” the boy’s dad said smiling at him. “I’m goin’ to the porch, daddy,” said the young boy pointing in the direction of the old man. His father nodded his approval and the young boy quickly bounced upon the porch and headed to the bench where the old man sat whittling away on a stick of wood. He bounced up on to one of the bench and pulled himself against the back. His eyes were immediately on the knife watching in fascination as the blade cut away the wood from the stick. The old man worked the word rapidly cutting notches here and there, shaping it gently from a stick to an object of art.

“What’s ya doin’? the young boy said never taking his eyes from the knife. The old man stopped momentarily and looked in the boy’s direction. Giving him a warm smile, he replied, “Just whittling.” “What’s that mean?” the boy shot back still staring at the stick of wood and the knife. The old man went right back to his whittling and replied, “I am using this sharp knife to turn this stick of wood into something that I want to create. It might be a dog, or a horse. I just might carve it into something that looks a lot like you. It’s called whittling. I like to do it just to see what I can create. It gives me pleasure and a sense of accomplishment. You know we all need a sense of accomplishment.” The old man looked back at the young boy who quickly said, “Yeah, my daddy told me that one time.” “Can I do that? Can I try that whittling?” the young boy begged looking right into the old man’s face. “Well, I don’t know. This knife is mighty sharp. You would have to be very careful,” the old man answered. “Oh I would,” said the boy, “please, please can I try it, just once?” The old man looked up at the dad who had finished filling his tank and was now standing at the edge of the porch watching the exchange. “You need to ask your dad, son,” the old man said pointing to the boy’s father. “Can I dad? I will be really careful,” the boy begged. “Okay Joey. But only if you are very careful and you listen closely to this man on each cut. I am going inside to pay for the gas and get us something to drink.” Joey’s dad replied patting him on the head. Joey nodded and looked at the old man for his approval.

“What’s your name?” Joey asked as the old man carefully handed the stick of wood to Joey to hold in his left hand. He then took the knife by the blade between his fingers and held it out indicating that Joey could take it into his right hand. “My name’s Charlie, what’s your name?” asked the old man. “Joey, my name is Joey!” said the boy excited to be holding the knife. “Now, listen to me Joey. The first objective of whittling is to not cut yourself or anyone else. You always take your cuts going away from you and then you very carefully handle the knife with your palm holding the wood steady with your thumb. That way you can cut the small notches to give it shape. The second objective is to remain patient and let things flow naturally. You don’t want to force it, just let it come to you,” said Charlie as he directed Joey’s small hands in making his first slices with the knife. They both worked at it until finally Joey was handling the knife carefully and comfortably. Charlie was able to take his hands away and watch the joy on the boy’s face as he began to cut at the wood.

After a bit, Joey’s dad returned and watched proudly as Joey demonstrated how he could whittle with the knife all by himself. His dad smiled and said, “That’s great, Joey. You need to thank your new friend for allowing you to learn to whittle and then we have to get on toward home. Mom will be waiting dinner for us.” Joey nodded his understanding and held the pocket knife and stick of wood to Charlie. “Thank you, Mr. Charlie. It was nice of you to let me learn to whittle,” said Joey smiling as Charlie took the items into his big hands. “Maybe I’ll see you again sometimes, Mr. Charlie,” Joey added. “I’d like that, Joey, you come on back anytime. I’ll be right here.” Charlie smiled.

Joey and his dad headed back toward the minivan. Charlie looked down at the whittling. “Hey, Joey, come back here for a second will ya” Charlie said. Joey looked up at his dad who nodded his approval. Joey ran back up the steps to where Charlie sat on the bench. Charlie held out the piece of wood to Joey. “You keep this. Next time you come back, bring it with you and we will work on it some more. Then, one of these days, when you dad says it is okay, we’ll look into getting you your own knife for whittling,” Charlie said smiling at Joey. Little Joey grinned from ear to ear, grabbed the piece of wood and yelled, “Thanks Mr. Charlie. I’ll be bringing it with me next time and I hope it is soon!”

With that Joey turned and ran to catch up with is dad at the van.

As the father and son drove off down the road toward home, Joey sat in the passenger seat turning the wood in his hand and imagining what he could make with it. “I am going to make something real good with this piece of wood, daddy. I am going to make something to give to mom for her birthday and Mr. Charlie will help me. I want to do it because Mr. Charlie says we all need a sense of accomplishment,” Joey said continuing to stare down at the wood. “He is right about that, Joey. We all need that. We’ll get back to see him real soon. You just take good care of your wood until then," his dad instructed.  Joey nodded indicating that he planned to do just that.

Back on the bench on the porch, Charlie sat with his knife in his hand and the wood shavings on his lap. He watched the van head down highway. This time he knew who was in it and where they were going. He folded the blade back into the knife and slipped it back into his pocket. He brushed the wood chips from his clothing onto the floor of the porch. On some days, Charlie carved cats, dogs, and pigs. Today he smiled as he watched to van go out of sight. Today he knew that he had carved a friendship, something that would last a lifetime.

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billyaustindillon Level 2 Commenter 24 months ago

Wayne a great story, I have to say one of your best, I could sense the pleasure and mutual admiration with the little boy and the old man and the sense of achievement - great lessons and memories out of this story. Awesome stuff.

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Michael Adams1959 Level 2 Commenter 24 months ago

I love this story that is great

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Wayne Brown Hub Author 24 months ago

Thanks, Michael...one those that just showed up on my "mental front porch". Glad you liked it. Stop by again sometimes! WB

ralwus 24 months ago

Awesome story Wayne. Keep 'em coming. Gee, it was a dark and stormy night here last night (ha ha) Seriously, two counties away from me they got over 3 inches of rain in less than an hour, my pool is overflowing. I slept right through it though, too many horse shoe games yesterday wore me out. LOL

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Wayne Brown Hub Author 24 months ago

Thanks CC...I thought it was time for something uplifting to take my mind off the Gulf and such. You are like me...I could sleep through a tornado and one day I just might! Thanks for the read and the kind words, Charlie! WB

sheila b. Level 4 Commenter 24 months ago

As I read your story, I was feeling the unhurried pace you set for the old man and the boy and even the father. I was there, watching and listening. And happy for all of your people. Thanks.

ralwus 24 months ago

I love whittling, just don't have time for it. Ever hear of Mooney Warther? His museum is not far from me. Master carver/whittler who started when he was five.

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Wayne Brown Hub Author 24 months ago

That might have been Mooney in my story (the little boy), do ya think? No...I had not heard of him. It just seemed to be a good pasttime for this old feller. It would be a good one for me if I could keep from cutting myself!

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Wayne Brown Hub Author 24 months ago

Thanks,Sheila...you picked up on the pace of the day in which the story took place very well. WB

TimBryce 24 months ago

Well done Wayne. I remember whittlin' well.

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Wayne Brown Hub Author 24 months ago

Tim, when I was a young boy back in the dark ages, I would spend a couple of weeks of the summer at my grandpa's farm. He would take me into the small town nearby in his 1949 Blue Dodge pickup. When we got to the general store, he would buy me a pocket knife. The first thing I whittled was my finger...everytime! I would stick the cut finger in the pocket of my jeans too proud to have the knife to be hurt. My mother alway took it away when I returned home but inevitably, my grandpa would buy me another and I would cut myself with it! Thanks for your nice comments. Glad you enjoyed it! WB

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sunflowerbucky Level 1 Commenter 24 months ago

This was lovely!

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Wayne Brown Hub Author 24 months ago

Thanks Bucky...glad you liked! I needed to do a "feel good" story to wash some of that political jousting out of my brain for a while. WB

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agvulpes Level 3 Commenter 23 months ago

Wayne this was a great read! I'm sure growing up we all had a bit of 'Joey' in us and as we are getting into the grey hair stage we gain the status of handing on the 'whittling' skills that we have acquired throughout our lives! Keep up the good writing!

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Rochelle Frank 23 months ago

Yes, I would (wood) say it is one of your best too. I understand it well, knowing many "whittlers " personally I've even tried it myself, and there is something immensly satisfying about about pushing a really sharp knife into a piece of wood.

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Wayne Brown Hub Author 23 months ago

@agvulpes...Thank you! I love the feeling I get while writing a warm-hearted story that evocates things we have known for time on end. Whittling is not so important unless you are watching it through the fascinated eyes of a little boy. Thank you for your feedback...stop by again soon. WB

@Rochelle...glad to see you stopping in and giving a bit of feedback. I always appreciate that. I thought this would be one that you would enjoy and I am so glad to hear that you did. WB

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Suzie Cobb 23 months ago

Wow, this made me smile the entire read. I enjoy stories with life lessons. I haven't read much, but if this is an indication of your work, I'll have to look for more.

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Wayne Brown Hub Author 23 months ago

@Susie Cobb...Some of that here, some dark stuff, some adventure, some sports, some crime,some political commentary and some poetry. If you are language sensitive you may find a strong word or two but I try to keep it within the framework of realistic dialogue so plese don't be offended. If you are, then let me know! WB

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Truckstop Sally Level 5 Commenter 16 months ago

Thanks WB. Once I got over my fear that someone was going to cut themselves . . . I was touched by the random acts of kindness. Joey for noticing and engaging the old man, and Charlie for gifting the boy with a sense of accomplishment. Very dear.

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Wayne Brown Hub Author 16 months ago

@Truckstop Sally...I wrote this one thinking about when I use to go and stay a couple of weeks with my grandparents in the summer. My granddad was a farmer and he believed that every male who walked the earth needed a pocket knife, not for protection or harm, but because it had so many uses for opening sacks, etc, etc. It was a very practical tool to him. Every summer he took me in to the dry goods and hardware store and bought me a knife. Every summer, fifteen minutes later, I had cut my finger, and stuck it into my pocket to bleed too embarassed to tell my grandpa because he was so proud of giving me that knife. The next summer, the whole process would complete itself again....until I finally grew up and quit cutting my fingers! LOL! Luckily, I never did much damage but a little slice comes with a lot of blood. His heart was in the right place! WB

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AEvans Level 7 Commenter 13 months ago

Thumbs Up! It's amazing how you took your life growing up into accountability and created such a wonderful story.:)

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Wayne Brown Hub Author 13 months ago

@AEvans...I once read that Stephen King had advised aspiring writers to "write what you know". I find that has value as in this story I could relate with the young boy's infatuation with the knife...made it easier to portray for the reader. Thanks for the good words AE! WB

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Sunnie Day Level 8 Commenter 13 months ago

Hi Wayne,

I had done a poem on Whittling and was trying to find out where it originated and low and behold there was your story on Whittling on the web...I added your link..many do not know about this fine art. I am from Texas too..Thanks for a great story.

Sunnie

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Wayne Brown Hub Author 13 months ago

@Sunnie Day...Thank you for the read and the gread comments, Sunnie. I do appreciate it. This is one of my favorites in the stable. Whittling was pretty common as I was growing up especially among old men who sat and contemplated the troubles of the world. I find there is something serene about just thinking of it so your poem will probably bring that message as well. WB

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Becky Katz Level 8 Commenter 2 months ago

This is a beautiful story. I see old men here in TN, sitting on benches around the courthouse whittling and talking with the other old men.

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ThomasBaker 2 months ago

Another home run!

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Wayne Brown Hub Author 2 months ago

@Becky Katz...That was my inspiration, Becky...I have seen a lot of them too and often wondered if they had something to share. Thanks so much. WB

@ThomasBaker...Thank you for those kind words! WB

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50 Caliber Level 7 Commenter 2 months ago

Mr. Brown, a great little story with big message. It fascinated my mind back to the days spent with my grandpa, a feller who would give me knives to sit with him and whittle when I got to go and stay with him in the summer for a week or two. I got caught up in it seeing what you had written in my minds eye, passing cars with folks going or coming some in a hurry some not. Grandpa carved things, he had a special little monkey he carved out of a peach seed, he made many. Like you I made cut fingers and tooth picks. Now days I carve on grease wood bush limbs and make tooth picks and have 2 or 3 worn down small stock-mans knives razor sharp on all three blades that all came from my dad or grandpa, in my pocket. I carve time mostly.

You've written a warm hub of memories and I'll be setting on a rock carving time and think of this story now I'm sure. Might even carve something besides a tooth pick. Thanks for the warm entertainment,

Dust

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Wayne Brown Hub Author 2 months ago

@50 Caliber...Thank you, Dusty...so glad I come bring some old memories alive...those are very good ones too! WB

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